NEFTALI wrote:
checkout the medium and tell me what you think...
NEF ~ In case you aren't aware, in iMovie '08 you can choose +Share > Re-publish to MobileMe Gallery...+, fill in the
Description field and click
Update without re-uploading your video. Your description will then appear below your video and also pop-up when someone mouses over the video's title.
The music worked especially well when sometimes its change of tempo coincided with a change in the visuals. ...Whether that was by chance or not, I think it would be worthwhile working more on synchronizing the music with the visuals.
At times there was too much text to read and it disappeared before I had finished reading it. ...If you really want viewers to read something, then split up lengthy text into two or more separate slides. ...If you don't want viewers to read it, don't put it there and risk causing your viewers to feel confused.
...Although perhaps you don't need to try to explain everything via a lot of text — instead, you might be able to rely on the emotional impact from the music and visual movement to get your message across.
It's also okay to occasionally give the viewer's eyes a rest by gradually fading to a blank screen for just a second at appropriate points in the presentation. And in general, simplifying your presentation may (paradoxically) make it more meaningful. Here are some quotes regarding simplicity...
"Simplicity is about subtracting the obvious and adding the meaningful." — John Maeda
"Make things just as simple as they need to be, but not simpler." — Einstein?
"With presentation, you have to decide what little chunk of the thing it is you’re going to talk about and that is it. You can go deep or you can go wide, but you can not do both, and frankly you can’t even go that deep or that wide either. It is after all just a short presentation — an ephemeral moment in time — so think carefully about what will be included and what will end up excluded." — Garr Reynolds
“Creativity means creative choices of inclusion and exclusion.” — Robert McKee
“Do only what is necessary to convey what is essential. Carefully eliminate elements that distract from the essential whole, elements that obstruct and obscure. ...Clutter, bulk, and erudition confuse perception and stifle comprehension, whereas simplicity allows clear and direct attention." — Richard Powell
“When forced to work within a strict framework the imagination is taxed to its utmost – and will produce its richest ideas. Given total freedom the work is likely to sprawl." — T.S. Eliot
