I have a similar issue, but it's a recurring one: large downloads from the Mac App Store seem to get "stuck" after an hour or so. We have slow DSL, so major updates (e.g., High Sierra) often take more than 4 hours, and quite often they download for an hour or so and then simply stop. This happens whether I download them from the App Store or from the web site. At the App Store the progress bar goes away and the application appears dead. On the web, the download progress bar advances to a certain point and just stops. Even the "time remaining" number remains unchanged, after several hours of no apparent activity have elapsed. I don't even have any idea where they're stopping: my ISP? The App Store? Somewhere else?
Can someone suggest what further information I can discover to help at least localize the problem? For the last few major updates, I've been forced to drive to a local Apple dealer an hour away and use their much faster Internet connection via my own WiFi.